In hoton se muskaan le gaya koi,
in aankhon mein aasoon de gaya koi,
har lamha yaadgaar banata tha woh,
par ab un saare haseen lamhon ko le gaya koi...
*unfinished*
Gosh...i have so many incomplete poems! :-S
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- Ek vichitr paheli hoon mein, jisse suljha saka na koi... Ek unkahi kavita hoon mein, jisse sun saka na koi... Ek gumshuda vyakti hoon mein, jisse doondh saka na koi... Khudh ko hi na samaj payee toh kya samjhega aur koi! ~Khushi
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Kho gaya koi will b d title !!
How could u write the feelings of my heart??
Is this telepathy?? [:P]
kyun saare sukh leke dard chodd gaya koi...
kyun bichadaa mujhase aur de gaya yaade koi...
karo. jaldi se complete karo !! [:)]
hee hee!!
tum hi complete karlo, Sammy...i think u wud be able to do it better! :P
waiting for you to complete ...i can help though....
nehin rohit...tum bhi karo! [:P]
Best hoga tum aur sammy karo...i'll edit!! hee hee!
when will you finish it? :-w
tiz weekend... B-) hopefully! :D
Mera mid-term hai is Friday ko!! :(
chance encountered ur page..aap achche likthe ho
ak
thanx..i use this link for devanagari transliteration.. see if this one helps
http://www.iit.edu/~laksvij/language/hindi.html
ak
kia hota hai khizan bahar kai anai janai sai
sab mausam hain dil khilnai aur dil murjhanai sai
[anonymous]
wah wah...talha! kya baat hai! :D
N whoz tiz 'Suru'?? :-/
Hey..
u rite really good
thanx Mitthu!! :)
Hey sowmi
Just visited your blog after quite long .
U are turning into an perfect "incomplete" poet :P
do give this some time and complete the stuff.
Cheerz
In hothon pe muskan phir aayegi..
Aakhon mein khushi phir chha jayegi..
Lamhe yaadgar ban jayenge..
Ki un lamho ko sambhal payega na koi.. :)
kaisa hai?? ;)
too gud Pri!!!! >:D<
Wah kya baat hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!
These lines are really precious !!! Everybody "thoda intezar ka mazaa lijiye.."
Whoa .. Is is THE SOWMYA ???? .. :D .. Greetings princess .. ! How are you .. Itni bhari bhari shayiri kar rahi hain aajkal .. :o
:D
btw, itni 'bhari bhari' shayari toh humesha se karti aa rahi hoon, Shahab! bus zahir nehin hone detin inhe hum... :P
lolz...
In hoton se muskaan le gaya koi,
in aankhon mein aasoon de gaya koi,
har lamha yaadgaar banata tha woh,
par ab un saare haseen lamhon ko le gaya koi...
kyun mehekta gulsitan jalaa gaya koi,
kyun dehekti daastan banaa gaya koi,
muskurati, gungunati thi ye meri zindagi,
kyun dard-e-zindagaani bana gaya koi.
-A
wah wah!!! :)
How talented u are sowmy!!!!!!!!!
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